18 MarMore poetry

This was for a class. I forget what the type of poetry is called but it’s like the old ballads, instead of rhyming they repeat the same sound in the sentance.

For example:

Red wagons rolled wearily over rain-covered roads

notice the “R” sound

So without further ado . . . here is my poem (I had to write about a battle):

Death

A dark day dawns for those ahead

Pale crimson sun perched, parched and dry

Like ants, the men march moving on

Warriors, like wolves, watch wondrously

At such a day as this

Two armies arrive around the road

They face each other with eager excitement

A battle’s before them, beautiful to fighters

Pushing, they surge, to prove their passion

On such a day as this

Silence slips softly over all

Quiet quakes in the quivering bones of those

Who wish to leave and wander to freedom

But battles ahead, behold, it’s ready

On such a day as this

Tens of troops charge, tumultuously forward

Their war cries crack through the quiet dawn

Horse’s hooves and whinnies are heard as well

And the clanging of weapons, clutched violently

On such a day as this

Blood battle cries echoes eerily around the brawny men

Wounded warriors roar for help or weapons

Hurt horses cry hoarsely for water

Men die dreadfully down on the dirt

On such a day as this

As the sun sets smooth in the hills

The battle is over, brave men breathe their fill

Who won the war? None know now at all

Death demanded the men to be equal today

On such a day as this

Rather cryptic I know but I like it. So . . . comments?

2 Responses to “More poetry”

  1. Hope says:

    Beautiful…

  2. Poem says:

    Some poetry is free verse, which either creates its own set of unique rules for that poem or has no rules. Poem

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