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Shattered – Poem

February 27, 2009

shattered glass below my feet
shattered skies above
shattered dreams are in my head
and shattered hopes below

the jagged edges cut like knives
the cracks won’t fill with glue
my shattered dreams remain untouched
I only wish I knew

I tread the silent, hurting path
and sink into the pain
I walk on through the lonely streets
I hope I won’t again

I see a building, standing tall
and walk on through the door
I glimpse a shattered mirror
I wonder what’s in store?

I gaze into the broken mirror
and see me staring back
I wonder if that’s really me
something seems to lack

the face is pained and lined with care
the eyes are hallowed tombs
the scars are deep and dripping blood
I turn out of the room

back to the street my feet take me
the rain is pouring down
I start back up the road again
I barely make a sound

perhaps I’m meant to wander here
forever lost and searching
perhaps my life is over now
my step is slow and lurching

shattered glass below my feet
shattered skies above
shattered dreams are in my head
and shattered hopes below

That’s not a depressing poem, oh no. :) But it really sums up this week which was: exhausting, straining, frustrating, full of regrets, angry, sadness and pain.

Tomorrow afternoon I’m crashing.

Comments on the poem welcome. =D

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Stop And Stare – One Republic

December 28, 2008

This town is colder now, I think it’s sick of us
It’s time to make our move, I’m shaking off the rust
I’ve got my heart set on anywhere but here
I’m staring down myself, counting up the years
Steady hands, just take the wheel…
And every glance is killing me
Time to make one last appeal… for the life I lead

The more I think about my life and how I lived, the more I regret it. Listening to this song makes me feel like I should apologize for my life and start all over again. “Steady hands, just take the wheel” is the story of my life as I jump between having God in complete control and then grabbing control of my life myself. The fact is, although I’d like to pretend otherwise, I hate the feeling of depending on other people. In general, I don’t. I make a large enough amount of money not to have to borrow, I don’t crave for other people’s acceptance, and I can feel fine just hanging out with myself. But also, my life is focused about me. Maybe it’s time to “shake off the rust”.


Stop and stare
I think I’m moving but I go nowhere
Yeah I know that everyone gets scared
But I’ve become what I can’t be, oh
Stop and stare
You start to wonder why you’re here not there
And you’d give anything to get what’s fair
But fair ain’t what you really need
Oh, can you see what I see

This part of the song is totally true to my life. Most of the time, I think I’m improving and getting better, but if I stop to think about it, I’m really going nowhere. I may get my school done or help a friend out, but I haven’t improved how I act overall and I haven’t changed in my relationship with God. I often wonder why I’m here and not there, I expect, after being a Christian for so many years, to magically understand God and His Will. I expect people to be fair to me, but if “fair ain’t really what I need” from God, if He did give me what’s fair, I’d be lost.


They’re trying to come back, all my senses push
Untie the weight bags, I never thought I could…
Steady feet, don’t fail me now
Gonna run till you can’t walk
Something pulls my focus out
And I’m standing down…

Stop and stare
I think I’m moving but I go nowhere
Yeah I know that everyone gets scared
But I’ve become what I can’t be, oh
Stop and stare
You start to wonder why you’re here not there
And you’d give anything to get what’s fair
But fair ain’t what you really need
Oh, you don’t need

What you need, what you need…

Stop and stare
I think I’m moving but I go nowhere
Yeah I know that everyone gets scared
But I’ve become what I can’t be
Oh, do you see what I see…

So overall, this is an apology to people for times I’ve acted like a complete jerk and every time I’ve failed. I’m hoping that sooner rather than later I’ll be over there and not here.

~Alison

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“I can hear them” – August Rush

December 19, 2008

So I just watched August Rush today for the first time (great movie btw) and a lot of the plot is focused on August’s ability to hear regular everyday sounds as music.I guess I just thought most people did this, not to his extent where we can write symphonies but in the way I mentioned in my last point. The rain always is singing, it’s a very repetitive song and rather rhythmic but it sings. I think that might be why I like it so much. If I could have my way, I’d spend at least 2 hours a day walking in the rain. Most other things though, besides rain, I cannot hear without consciencely looking for the words. If I think about it, while I’m typing this, my keyboard is talking, but I don’t hear that if I don’t look.

The other thing I notice, is that in parts of songs or musical parts where there is no words, I hear words for the music. For instance, just today (fiddling around with my hammered dulcimer quickly):

G – Don’t

B – You

C  – Know

Is what I heard. The songs that I can’t hear extra words to the music in tend to be my favorite. I almost think it’s like they’re complete and I don’t feel like I have to fill in anymore.

I recently tried song writing. Basically, writing poetry and matching notes to it in my head (because I’m really bad at writing them out on paper) and I found it quite easy to have the notes. I don’t really like what I came up with, but it was easy.

So I’m assuming I’m not alone, correct? Most of you readers are musical people, so tell me what you hear?

~Ali

by the way – just a little catch-up work and speech practice tomorrow and I’ll be on Christmas break! =D

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Poem

October 21, 2008

I’m not good at poetry, don’t profess to be. So critize to your heart’s content this poem I wrote when I was really overtired.

If you’re wondering how it relates to me, I’ve been listening to way to many of those songs on love by Steven Curtis Chapman and Mark what’shisface (Shwaltz? or something . . . )

I have a deep fear that I could never be a parent because of my lack of patience and temper. I’ve read/heard so many stories of kids who are “scarred” for life by their unsuitable parents . . .

*shrugs* anyway . . . onto the poem:

A harsh word here,

A harsh word there,

Do you realize what you’re doing?

I doubt you even care.

 

Everytime you shout

And then don’t apologize,

Makes another sleepless night

Filled with my lonely cries

 

Everytime you tell me I’m a failure

The words pierce deep within my heart

I feel like I’m a sailor

Lost in a sea of darkness

 

One by one you lay the brick

Day by day my soul transfixed

I watch and cry, why can’t you see?

The things that I was meant to be

 

The bricks you build create a wall ,

The wall you make is now too tall.

 

I can’t see past

I can’t climb  the wall

Instead I turn, at last

I don’t wait for your call

 

Some day, I’ll want to reach you again

Can I leap the wall?

I am barred, the way, from men

My own mind created

 

Did I choose this way?

Or was it you?

Or did both of us,

In the end, construe 

 

We weren’t meant to be

You and I

Anymore than a desert and a sea

 

I’m ten years old, i bed and crying

You last look you gave, was so very cold

My hearts so sore, I think I might be dying

 

I don’t know what you want

But I know I do

I just want you to understand

That I love you.

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Creation

September 22, 2008

Creation – The Basics

Viewpoints:

Atheistic Evolution

Theistic Evolution

Special Creation

Atheistic Evolution

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Atheistic Evolution – man is the accident and random product of a blind and nonpersonal series of chemical and biological events. All living organisms have developed from the simple to the more complex life forms.

This is just plain wrong. Every organism in creation, even the “simple” ones are amazingly complex. The idea that things like DNA came about randomly is silly. Plus, this still doesn’t explain where the chemical, etc stuff came from in the first place.

Special Creation – man is the direct product from the hand of God and that the statements in Genesis 1 and 2 are to be taken at face value. Genisis 1 and 2 present a clear case for believing in a special twenty four hour six day creation week.

Theistic Evolution – one God, the Creator of matter, who chose the method of evolution to bring all things into existence.

People usually pick this if they want to compromise and fit science into the Bible. The main reason they do this is because the earth is older that Special Creationists can really explain for. However, the reason we got the idea that the earth is old is through testing, and to be perfectly honest our testing methods can be very inaccurate. There is also an idea that the earth was created with an appearance of age, just as Adam and Eve were adults, not children.

Gap Theory -

The theory goes roughly like this:

  • God created the universe billions of years ago.
  • Then the geological ages proposed by evolutionists took place over billions of years of earth’s history.
  • Life-forms arose during that time that are now preserved in the fossil record, and these fossils allegedly verify that the geological ages took place.
  • At the end of the geological ages, Satan rebelled in Heaven and many angels followed him.
  • God then cast Satan down to earth, the earth underwent a huge disaster or cataclysm, and it was left without form and void, with darkness on the face of the deep (as described in Genesis 1:2).
  • God then re-created the earth in the six literal days of creation described in the first chapter of Genesis.

(taken from: http://www.users.bigpond.com/rdoolan/gaptheory.html )

Gap Theory is used to explain the tons of fossils which we have dated (again) and presumed too old. My personal theory – they probably came from the flood.

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There’s my take of Creation. You can probably tell I’m a Special Creationist. ;) (After all, we got the cool name!)

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What It Takes To Be A Christian

September 9, 2008

In my personal devotions I’m going through the book of Romans. Romans Chapter 4 raises an interesting question for me . . .

Can someone who lives nowadays and has never read The Bible be a christian?

I think the answer is yes and in two ways.

1st) The rather obvious answer is that someone can hear the about God and Jesus and believe. They don’t actually have to read about Him to be a Christian. This is what many Roman Catholics do or just new Christians (even in the New Testament.)

However, I think that when someone asks a question like this they don’t want an answer like #1 what they’re wondering is (for example)

2) Can someone on a deserted island be a Christian?

I would say yes again although I would be careful about this.

Creation points to God, (“The heavenly hosts declare the glory of God [Psalms] . . . ) and someone who only has something like that to look at can believe.

Also, just as Abraham “believed and it was accounted to him as Faith” so someone can come to believe in a living God and trust in him and therefore any promises that he would make to humans (including Jesus) however, the chances of someone actually doing this are very slim.

Personally, I think that God will never turn away someone who honestly wants to be a Christian.

And there’s my two cents worth on the matter! Feel free to disagree and leave a polite but argumentative comment. ;)

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Promises . . .

September 8, 2008

In our culture we use the phrase “I promise” flippantly.

“Call me tonight?”

“I promise.”

So what if that person doesn’t call.

“Oops, sorry.”

The Bible seems to think that promises are VERY important. I noticed this during singing a psalm on Sunday.

Before this, I knew I shouldn’t make a promise I couldn’t keep and it was better not to promise at all. However, in Pslam 15 it says this,

“He swears (makes a promise) and does not change it, although it hurts him so”

This makes it seem vitally important to keep your word. It’s a pity more of us don’t think about that kind of thing . . .

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Predestination vs. Free Will

September 4, 2008

This is a very big, and undecided issue in Christianty and one that I, and my family, has a very decided opinion on.

First, I’d like to say that there is “evidence” for both free will and predesination in the Bible.

Free Will: “Let him come freely and drink of the water of life” rev.

Predestination: “Morever whom He predestined, these He also called; whom He called, these He also justified; and whom He justified, these He also glorified.”

With this mind, let me point out that although Free Will can be encompassed in my definition of Predesination, Predestination cannot be encompassed in Free Will.

to better understand this, let me define my terms:

Free will – the idea that becoming a Christian is determined only on your own personal choice as a human

Predesination – the idea that God has pre-determined who will be Christians and who will not

I am not trying to present a hypo-calvinist point of view, I don’t believe we’re puppets on a string, instead I think we have free will limited by our nature.

Let me try to illustrate my belief with an example:

Take the following information and baised on just that (no other variables) come to a conclusion:

1) Alison likes to try new foods

2) Mom does not like to try new foods

3) Neither Mom nor Alison has eaten Sushi.

If you were to offer Mom and Alison sushi who do you think would take it? Mom? Alison? Both? Neither?

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If you were playing along with my completely hypothetically illustration you would have said Alison.

Now consider this: by coming to that conclusion did you interfer with Alison’s or Mom’s freedom of choice?

Of course not! But from what you knew from them, you were able to predict the outcome quite well.

God, I think most Christians would agree, knows everything. He had a plan from the beginning of time. (To send his Son, this is predicted in Genesis and all throughout the Old Testament) and we’d all agree that God knows us through and through so why is it so strange to think that God wouldn’t be able to know and predict which of us will become Christians and which won’t?

I think the main reason people disagree with Predestination is because they automatically assume that Predestination means we’re being forced against our will to do something. Many also don’t like the idea that Jesus didn’t come to save everyone. Plainly, he didn’t, but that’s a discussion for another time . . .

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